This here is the Feedback for my pitch that I did, discussing the good and bad points of my preliminary magazine/areas to improve. I asked for two good points in my preliminary magazine and one area that I could improve. I asked for peer feedback as this acts as one massive focus group with lots of honest feedback. My preliminary task was a magazine about Sunderland College and was aimed at students who are thinking about going to the college. Most of the feedback was good and there weren't any major flaws in the magazine. This gives me confidence for when I will make my actual music magazine.
Some of the areas to improve on weren't major issues and they are things I could easily change from my preliminary task. Some of the suggestions were...
- Change the font
- Make some of the text bigger
Although I wont change these things, it gives me more knowledge of what to do and what not to do on my magazine cover.
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